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All The Female Disciples Want To Kill Me
by Hateful Ears Chant Crimes
Su Bei sat on No-Sword Peak, contentedly watching his female disciple scurry about.That would have completed his first task for his System Quest assigned by "The Highest Ten Thousand Fold Feedback for Discipleship" system!Xia Ruoching looked at Su Bei with a serious face,“Master, this is the spiritual fruit I got from the Sect Leader. He said it'd be helpful for your injuries!”Su Bei gazed at the half-black, half-red fruit in front of him and fell into deep thought.“Are you sure this is what the…
Middle Child Syndrome
by Holy_mackrel
_ _ _ _ MXFXF relationship. Please read the note. Please add it to the collection then and support me. All feedback will be appreciated. Check my profile for more workShe was not the heiress, the eldest, or the youngest. She just existed in the family, keeping her head down and letting herself wash away until she could leave."I tried standing out, staying quiet, and even voicing my thoughts. But no matter what I do, I am never acknowledged. Does my existence even matter? After all, it's not like…
Reincarnated Into A Dead Woman's Body In Another World
by Eletro101
"CRASH!" the last sound he heard; the last image being the smile of his friends.Jotou Howllett, a twenty-one year old nobody who finds little to no purpose in his life, wants to be a freelancer to make it big whilst trying to avoid education. He spends his last day of freedom with his friends before he's forced by his parents to attend college. That last day became his true last day as a white light flashed and he opened his eyes in a coffin, suffocating. He, now she, found herself to be in the …
Awakened As A Dungeon Core?
by Bietarnu
What happens when a normal man awakens in a world of magic and monsters? What if he awakens as a gemstone that can't move, eat, or communicate but is somehow alive? What happens when this stone learns to cast magic and create rooms, to bring life to monsters of its own and defend itself from invaders? This is the story of that mans journey from a small one room tunnel to a magnificent challenge to the universe.Chapters range from 1k-1.5k words usually! First time writing this type of novel but a…
FEEDBACK: The College System
by Caren_Cc
What if success whispered in your ear, solved your problems... and rewrote reality behind your back?Rachel never asked to be chosen. One morning she woke up with gaps in her memory, a strange interface whispering through her thoughts, and classmates acting like yesterday never happened. But when the system began guiding her—subtly at first—life got easier. Her answers were faster. Her instincts sharper. People listened. And others began to fall into line.Grades soared. Doors opened. Friends chan…
reincarnated as deku with feedback
by Tyler_Pavlovich
Akira ido is reincarnated as deku with feedbacks powers this is my first fanfiction so give feedback please
An Ordinary Complex
by Holy_mackrel
_ _ _ _ MXFXF relationship. Please read the note. Please add it to the collection then and support me. All feedback will be appreciated Perhaps everyone was right, but Lisa Grace was cursed. How else would you explain what happened to her life and her dream of living an Ordinary Life?———‘This will not work out, so we should break up now. It’s not you, it’s me! I recently found my soul mate and want to be with them.”Lisa was not shocked when her boyfriend told her this. She did not even have enou…
The Mischievous Maiden & The Sleeping Prince
by MizA
A runaway maiden finds herself entangled in a tale of horror when she saves the Bride of a prince from a Haunted Castle.---WARNING: HEAVY SUPERNATURAL ELEMENTS, GORE, DISTURBING THEMES, SLOW-BURN ROMANCE, RICH-IN-STORY NOVEL!I hope you like this story. If you wish, please support this tale by voting, rating, and commenting. Your feedback on typos or bad grammar is welcomed and appreciated.
Ghost Rider in Twilight/TVD/TO
by Karikalan_000
Shiva was a 28-years old ordinary man who died in a car crash and was reborn with the power of Ghost Rider in the Twilight and TVD (The Vampire Diaries) world....Arthur's Note: My grammar may not be the best, but I'm working on improving it. I don't own any of the characters, only my original character (OC). I would appreciate feedback and support if you enjoy the story. I will be updating it three to four days a week.
Hundredfold Feedback System: The Emperor and his invincible wifes!
by FlawlessWriter
[No Virgin+Villain protagonist+Strong Wife+Emperor+Low-Key] Standing on top of the Palace of Heaven overlooking all living beings his hand behind his back with severals powerful empress next to him Jin Yi said softly: "Low-key is prosperity this is my Dao!"(The image does not belong to me and if there is a problem I will not hesitate to remove it.)
Rubik’s Man: I’m Rich & You’re Dead
by AuthorsDread
Smoke Pac, a top gangster of Clown City fell to the lower rung of the criminal ladder and became a sewage rat left for dead. He was betrayed and brutally killed by his former mafia associates. During his death, he accidentally awakened the mysterious powers of the Rubik's Cube System. With his new lease on life and newfound powers, he vowed to regain his title as number one Crime Lord of Clown City while relishing in his sweet-sweet revenge.Authors Note: Feel free to share your feedback, drop a …
My New Marvel Life
by RJTStories
Seth McCauley, a "Marvel" nerd that was an ordinary person who hadn't done anything other than just live his life, never doing anything to make him stand out is given a chance to finally do something amazing. He is reincarnated in the MCU with all of his favorite characters with three wishes to change his fate and finally be someone that the world will remember foreverNOTICE: I do not own Marvel or any of it's elements only the MC and my fanfic elementsP.S. This is my first time writing a novel …
Lycan's Sin
by Jeethz
A powerful tale of love and vengeance. When the person who you have sworn to kill turns out to be your lover. It's hard to forgive when wounds run so deep. You can't help when love runs Its course after years of hate. Will they give in to their desires or be the enemies the fate had made them be.I need feedback guys good or bad. You can bash me on my grammar and spelling mistakes so I may fix itLove and hugsAuthor
this is my first story so please feel free to give me some feedback
by Who_knows_5078
New Life as a Futanari Tentacle Girl
by SleepnSweets
This will be the first time writing something. I'm going to take all genres I like and try force them together.The MC gets reincarnated into a world of swords and magic.Start of the novel will be character and setting introduction, and later MC will travel around. R18 chapters will naturally come later... nevermind, the whole story is R18.First few chapters are just her building her 'character'.[R18 Tags]Harem | NSFW | Domination | Threesome | Foursome | Tentacle | Futa on Female | Female on Fut…
Veiled Brilliance: Chronicles of a Reincarnated Being
by Eaglestriker_22
Glen was taken advantage of throughout his entire life. Depressed at the miserable state his life is in, he goes for a walk and ends up dying. He meets the god over death who gives him a second chance at a new life in a world of magic and a system.Join him now, as Eric, as he fights to seek happiness in his new life.This is my first book so feel free to leave your feedback. I feel that criticism helps to improve some people and I'm one of them. Right now I'm writing whenever I have the free time…
Saranghae My Superstar
by MORAN94
Hana Subekti, seorang mahasiswi Indonesia yang mendapat beasiswa untuk kuliah di Korea selatan. K-Art University menjadi kampus tempat ia menimba ilmu.Namun, suatu hal terjadi dan membuatnya harus menjadi seorang karyawan magang sebagai asissten penanggung jawab artis di sebuah agensi. Hal ini membuatnya harus berhubungan dengan seorang aktor sekaligus penyanyi yang sangat terkenal di Korea, Kang Junhyuk. Artis asuhan agensi tempat Hana bekerja yang ternyata punya sifat jelek di balik gemerlapny…
Blood Lust: The Midnight Resort
by Myra_Agpalza_Butac
Hiraya has always known that she had special skills that were quite strange. Imagine her surprise then when an infamous aristocrat chooses her from the many talents of the Midnight Resort’s Mediterranean Branch to be exclusively his due to these mysterious capabilities.Marion is not the typical multi-billionaire businessman. His family history is of regal stature and has a long history of power and prestige. However, he also holds a dark secret that needs a unique and special woman to solve. And…
The word awakened and gained a system: why are all my quests perverted
by Resset_Potato
The world awakens, dungeons form, animals and plants mutate, the gods spectate the world's happenings and find people they think are interesting, and humans gain powers and systems that are tailored to them (They're all the same thing, just with different designs). The usual stuff. It just so happens that our main character's version of the system is, for better or lack of words...flawed. ---Disclaimer:NSFW content will be marked accordingly: N+ for 18+, N- for darker themes, and N for a mix of …